Wednesday, June 23, 2010

Prologue and a Welcoming!

Here is my Fanfiction! It takes place in Thunderclan after the battle with the Dark Forest!

Allegiances:

Thunderclan

Leader: none
Deputy: Brambleclaw dark brown tabby tom
Medicine cat: Jayfeather gray tabby tom

Warriors:
Squirrelflight dark ginger tabby she-cat with green eyes
Brackenfur golden brown tabby tom
Lionblaze golden tom
Cinderheart gray tabby she-cat
Bumblestripe very pale tom
Crowfeather dark gray tom
Leafpool light brown tabby she-cat
Dovepelt fluffy gray she-cat

   PROLOGUE-


And as Tigerstar stood over Firestar's body, the rasping of the ginger leader's breath could be heard growing shallower.
"I've waited a long time for this Kittypet." The broad shouldered cat drew up on his hind legs to do a death blow.
"Lionblaze," Dovepelt screeched,"Tigerstar has Fire-" Before Dovepelt could finish Lionblaze killed Breezepelt, who was attacking Crowfeather, and raced to Tigerstar. He was dodging the dead warriors and live warriors battling each other,when he realized that this is what Tigerstar had been training live warriors for. He saw the shining pelts of Starclan fighting against the mangy pelts of the warriors from the Place of No Stars.
As he jumped onto the back of Tigerstar, he heard the surprised screech that he had hoped for.
"So, you still believe in the prophecy?" Tigerstar said in a sneer, "I'll show you that you can be killed!"
"Not if I can help it!" Lionblaze scoffed. They tussled in the grass and Lionblaze felt deep claws rip open his shoulder. Soon Cinderheart joined him but Lionblaze pushed her aside.
"This is something I have to do by myslef." He whispered gently. The lok of pure love she gave him told him that she felt the same for him as he did for her."I love you" he mewed.
"I love you too, but hurry Tigerstar is getting back up." She urged. Tigerstar staggered to his paws. "So, you love her." He mewed with a slight threat hidden in his words. But Lionblaze didn't understand. "Yes." He mewed firmly. Lionblaze drew back to attack again, but Tigerstar was faster. Tigerstar sped past him, leaving Lionblaze stunned. He knew Tigerstar would never flee from a battle. He turned around as he heard a shrill scream. He shuddered inwurdly as he saw Cinderheart thrashing side to side as Tigerstar gripped his massive teeth in her neck. He reached them as he saw a ginger pelt speed pass him! Firestar! His leader had recovered from losing his 8th life and had grabbed Tigerstar by the hindleg. Tigerstar let go of Cinderheart, who flopped to the ground. He raced over to her and saw her chest rise and fall. Shes alive! Lionblaze thought triumphiantly! But he knew he had to get her to JayFeather. He gently grabbed her scruff and dragged her to the boulder where Jayfeather was keeping hurt cats. Then Dustpelt came and grabbed her. "Go," He murmured gently,"your the best fighter in the clan, they need you. I'll take her to Jayfeather." Lionblaze spoke a quick thanks and dashed back to the last place he saw Firestar. He saw Tigerstar under the ginger tabby's paws, scrabbling weakly. He heard Firestar say a few breif words,"This is for all the cats you killed, for all the lives you ruined." But Tigerstar didn't even flinch at the words.
"You would never kill me Kittypet." He sneered. He started coughing feebly, and as Lionblaze watched from where he stood, Firestar drew back his paw, claws unsheathed, and cut Tigerstar's throat open. Tigerstar's eyes grew wide with rage and hatred before they glazed over, no sign of the evil light they used to hold. Lionblaze rushed to his leaders side as Firestar collapsed. For the first time Lionblaze realized how much blood he had lost and how torn up he looked.
"Hurry! We have to get you to Jayfeather!"Lionblaze grabbed his leaders scruff.
"Stop, Lionblaze. I'm dying. I know it and you know it. But don't worry Brambleclaw will take over and I know he will take care of you and the rest of Thunderclan." He slowed as more blood trickled from his wounds,"I'll never be more proud of you. You saved the clan from more things than I've ever known a cat to do. The 3 of you, Jayfeather, Dovepelt and you, have saved this forest from the evils of Tigerstar.
I want you to help them even more with your powers, not just Thunderclan, but all the other clans too. And be kind to Squirrelflight and Leafpool, they have done nothing but kindness to you, and without Leafpool, then we wouldn't have you and Jayfeather." He added as Lionblaze opened his mouth to object," I know what she did with Crowfeather was foolish, but she has done many great things in her life too. And lastly, I want you to know that I am not sad to leave the forest. I have just banished the greatest evil this forest has ever seen." Firestar closed his eyes and drew in one last shallow breath and his body gave one last spasm, then lay still. He turned to fight again and saw an orange pelt dive into battle with him. "Firestar!" Lionblaze said, amazed that he would see his former leader now.
"Starclan is fighting this battle too you know," He said with a twinkle in his eye, "now no more talk, go and help your clan mates."

No comments:

Post a Comment